
Had to find a stopping point on this guy for the night. I can only pencil for so long before I start to not care about throwing slop on the page. I hit that point an passed it on this tonight. For all of its simplicity, This is a very labor-intensive sketch. For starters, getting the pose on the character was pretty difficult, trying to convey a sense of action and purpose and all. Then came the scenery. I love love LOVE the look of brick buildings in pencil drawings, but criminy there's a lot of parallel lines to be drawn. Throw in vanishing point perspective, and you've got a good twenty minutes of boring ruler work ahead of you. The payoff is 100% worth it, though. There's still quite a bit of pencil work left to be done here. I can't tell if I want to finish it with heavy pencils and learn some hard lessons that way, or bite the bullet and go in with the copic and brush pens. Probably the latter, now that I think of it. But that can wait for tomorrow.
Lessons learned: Don't slack off in the np blue planning stage and tell yourself you can just do the work with the hb later. That leads to slop (see doorframes). All the perspective lines and straight lines you're going to want need to be in there from the start. You'll just miss them later and have to break up your flow going back to put them in later. Also, try not to put the vanishing point directly behind your character's crotch. A) it looks like there's a blue sunburst coming from his balls, and B) it has the unintended effect of making that the center of the piece and all the lines will draw the eye to it. Good to know.
As for the subject matter here: beyond just loving a good picture of a ripped dude in sofee's (and let's be honest, who doesn't) this is actually a test sketch for the opening scene of the comic I'm taking my sweet ass time writing. At present I still only have the same ten pages scripted that I had two months ago. But at least I am learning that the book I'm writing is within my ability to draw. It won't be Eisner-bait or anything, but I think it will be something I'd like and be proud of. Whenever the hell I get around to making it. Shalom.
Mr.E